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           <span class="hero-title-line" data-split-text>Impeccable</span>
           <span class="hero-title-line hero-title-accent" data-split-text>Style</span>
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-        <p class="hero-subtitle" data-reveal>One design skill and 15 commands that work across Cursor, Claude Code, Gemini CLI, and Codex CLI. Stop getting generic AI output. Start getting intentional design.</p>
+        <p class="hero-subtitle" data-reveal>A design skill and 15 commands for Cursor, Claude Code, Gemini CLI, and Codex CLI. Fights the generic defaults baked into every LLM.</p>
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           <a href="#downloads" class="btn btn-primary">Get the Framework</a>
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         <h2 class="section-title">AI Has Design Bias</h2>
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-        <p class="section-lead" data-reveal>Every LLM learned from the same generic templates. Without guidance, you get the same predictable mistakes—every single time.</p>
+        <p class="section-lead" data-reveal>Every LLM learned from the same generic templates. Without explicit guidance, they converge on the same predictable defaults.</p>
 
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         <h2 class="section-title">The Antidote</h2>
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-        <p class="section-lead" data-reveal>The original Claude frontend-design skill says to avoid Arial and Inter. We've expanded it with 60+ specific patterns that fight model bias across every design domain.</p>
+        <p class="section-lead" data-reveal>Anthropic's original frontend-design skill laid the foundation. We built on it with curated patterns and anti-patterns across typography, color, layout, motion, and more.</p>
 
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